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EYON: Fantasy - Chapter 1 - Prologue

I've been stuck in writer's block for half a decade trying to figure out the best original story to follow, and I believe I've finally landed on a winner.

Marin's backstory you saw in Chapter 4 of Silver Age inspired this rewrite of the hero's backstory for THIS universe. Hope to have more to come as I go about working on my other projects as I claw my way out of my writer's block.

Synopsis: On the continent of Eyon- a world of swords and sorcery- deep in a mystic wood, a hermit finds a baby left alive in a wagon in the wake of a horrible monster attack. Alongside an elven mage and master huntress, they raise the boy into a strong warrior. Years later, the young, unassuming hero embarks upon a quest across this world in search of thrills, companionship, and adventure.

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*Pg. 16* Though they have met an unfortunate Tragic end to their life I hope they pass on knowing their child is safe ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป may you Both Rest in Peace

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top 2 Panels** Still so tragic to have met such a Gruesomely Violent fate **Bottom Right Panel** I love seeing him use magic, so cool ๐Ÿ˜Ž **Bottom Left 3 panels** Ahh smart, ๐Ÿฅฒ an heirloom to remember his motherโ€ฆ.๐Ÿค” now what can they give him thatโ€™s from his Father?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* **Top 3 Panels** Maternal Instinct ACTIVATE!!! ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿฅฐ **Bottom 5 Panels** Look at you master Folin showing your inherent Detective Skills๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* **Top 3 Panels** ๐Ÿ˜ฏ oh? **Bottom Right 2 Panels** ๐Ÿ˜ƒ itโ€™s a miracle!! **Bottom Left 2 Panels** โ€ฆ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบohhh theyโ€™re so precious

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* ๐Ÿ˜• poor Lady, ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป may her soul rest in peace

GamerLegend09

Yep. A Dwarven Summoner and Fighter. Basically he was the titular and crowned Hero who protected the continent from evil- basically who you would have regarded as the MC once upon a time. He may or may not have defeated the Demon King and their army a long time ago in his prime, and has now since retired.

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 11* Ahahh so it was magic ๐Ÿช„, and a dwarven lineageโ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜Š I would not have figured that, I just assumed they were hereditarily small in statureโ€ฆ๐Ÿ™‚ thatโ€™s cool regardless, the only reference I have of Dwarves using Magic is the Goblin Slayer Series

GamerLegend09

๐Ÿ˜ˆ thatโ€™s hot

GamerLegend09

If I recall right It would be a Futa or a Futanari in this comic?Is She appear or not?๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”(It would be an Amazing story anyway๐Ÿ˜)

Federico Cecchi

Oh wow indirect Title Drop (:The Dangers in My Heart)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* **Top Panel** I see so theyโ€™re all affiliated with each otherโ€ฆ..does this make him the master Roshi of this series just less perverted? (Also ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ this series is starting to feel dangerous for my heart) **Middle Right Panel** Interesting Frame right hereโ€ฆ almost like someone or thing can see them from inside the Wreckage-๐Ÿ˜„ oh hey the birdโ€™s back (just noticed) **Middle Left Panel** Looking from this angle I donโ€™t feel fully convinced on how focused he is ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ **Bottom Right panel** ๐Ÿ˜ณ Master!!? ๐Ÿ™ƒ starting to feel like heโ€™s leaning a little more towards the Roshi type old man **Bottom Left Panel** ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… I know I wouldnโ€™t be able to focus if I were him๐Ÿ˜

GamerLegend09

Ah. Got two warrior class women. No armor on at all, but I have a feeling that won't affect the amount of damage they'll be capable of taking throughout the story.

Super Lombax

You will see where it was hiding. Lol

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 9* **Top 2 Panels** This Environment would NOT! allow me to be this calm (๐Ÿ˜‘ seriously where was this old man Hiding that Ogre club?) **Bottom 4 Panels** ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜!!!โ€ฆ.. ๐Ÿคคwhatwerewetalkingabout?

GamerLegend09

Hahaha. I love that. Nice one.

TheWriteFiction

*Pg. 8* ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜จ the fuck did he pull that big ass Spiked Ogre club from?! ๐Ÿ‘น

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 7* ๐Ÿ˜ฉ of course thereโ€™s another one

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 6* ๐Ÿ˜ณ whoa big Ktty biig biig Kitty

GamerLegend09

Thank you. It looks great.

TheWriteFiction

*Pg 8* Birds: Bad ol' putty tat!

Chris Cannon

*Pg. 5* ๐Ÿ˜ง my gosh how horrible

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 4* ๐Ÿ˜Š I love when you color the landscapes like this, ๐Ÿ˜ the old man looks cool too

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 1, 2, & 3,* ๐Ÿ˜ Nice Moons ๐ŸŒ•

GamerLegend09

Oh, she almost had him. Gotta be quicker than that.

Super Lombax

I understand. Glad to have yah back, mate. Hope to get around to your commission of Android 18, Krillin, Gohan and Maron, if that's still on the table.

TheWriteFiction

๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ HOLY SHITE IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS STORY!!!! (๐Ÿ˜… sorry Iโ€™ve been away for a bit, internetโ€™s been a pain in my households ass)

GamerLegend09

Glad to hear you managed to move passed that block and started your passion project

Nagore6305

Glad you overcome your writers block to work on your long awaited project, that is EYON fantasy, I hope chapter 1 will have both protagonists become and remain naked like in the cover.

maverih

Ooo this looks cool! I always love to read an original fantasy story

Adam Dee

Ah. I see you've finally got one of your original projects going. Let's see how this turns out.

Super Lombax

I'm a sucker for the Fantasy Genre, and I thought this story was Haitus for evermore. I am happy to see this story getting some love and is going to go far.

RCD91

We bringing it back๐Ÿ‘€

The Jonizuka


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