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Thumbnails (Chapter 5 - 18) [NSFW]

HEY HUNS!

Managed to do the thumbnails/initial draft of the next episode //v//! Sharing with you guys both the censored version and the uncensored version since the censored one will have different panels and a panel missing, so you can look at both side by side if you're curious~

Love you guys!!

Thumbnails (Chapter 5 - 18) [NSFW] Thumbnails (Chapter 5 - 18) [NSFW] Thumbnails (Chapter 5 - 18) [NSFW]

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AHHH I'M GLAD ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’–!! Trying my best to show that having chatter during sex doesn't really ruin the mood~ What ruins the mood is one of the parties feeling uncomfortable so we can't have that ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ’ƒ

noriyuu

this comment was also partially inspired by allenโ€™s line โ€œno, lemme do it!!โ€ cuz i just think that was like, the PERFECT line of dialogue. the perfect blend between the eagerness of the experience mixed with the just slightly childish phrasing that serves as a reminder that this is allenโ€™s first time doing this kind of sexy stuff with a partner!!! like wow just so much is encapsulated in that one line and i love it ๐Ÿ’š

popsicle.john

holy nori!!!! outstanding. to expand upon what the person above me said, i am constantly amazed at how well you depict these scenes in a way that is sexy while also remaining realistic and drawing clear lines of consent that donโ€™t feel forced or like an afterthought. people always say โ€œasking for consent is sexyโ€ or โ€œconversations about consent donโ€™t ruin the moodโ€ but nobody actually shows an example of that, so irl people still feel uncomfortable in those moments. but you have managed to develop, time and time again, these scenes of sex and intimacy that are positive, respectful, adorable, hot, tender, awkward, ALL of it. and each time it feels like being shown that example, like itโ€™s genuinely informative and comforting and helpful and positive to see. like they could fricking use this comic to teach sex ed classes (at least in the USA where they suck lol)!!! the banter they have feels so natural and the way they each go between moments of shyness and boldness is so true-to-life. the sheer enthusiasm between both of them is so wonderful to see. THIS is healthy intimacy, this is sexy AND respectful and truly iโ€™ve never read another comicโ€”and i have read a LOT of comicsโ€”that portrays these scenes as incredibly as you do.

popsicle.john

YES COMMUNICATION!!! ๏ผผ(โ‰งโ–ฝโ‰ฆ)๏ผ I love that this breaks away from the โ€œless talk, more actionโ€ seen in ๐ŸŒฝ


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